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You're in every raindrop, that falls upon my upturned face.
Your heartbeat in the thunder that shakes my slender frame.
And it's your scent in the fresh feeling when the storm subsides;
     the smell of life,
          renewal,
               and revival.

It's you that drips from my soaked hair.
You that runs raindrop races down my arms, thrown to the sky.
You that falls from the rolling clouds, cradled in gray.
You drenching my body, as I cut loose and forget everything under the rain's soothing touch.

It's your love that splatters my blissful face,
     smiling lips,
          and closed eyes,
               when my stomping feet shatter another puddle's quiet slumber.

It's you, when the clouds part ways,
     cotton fingertips stretched like cobwebs to hold on,
          that shines through.
Your optimism that warms me, eyes alight in the beating sun.

Through the sun and storm,
     you hold me close.
It's you that gives me hope.
You that makes me see the sun behind the clouds.
You that gives me reason, love and life.
Just a little something for him. Thank you baby. :heart:

dA was down for a lil while...so I shoooould have been working on the requests. Have I mentioned that I'm a procrastinator?

Inspiration: My angel, of course + this song cover done by a friend of mine: [link]

Enjoy...or not! =D
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Angelove777 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Crazy awesome.
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SoImStillUnsure Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: Thank you!
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Angelove777 Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. You earned it. It touched my heart!
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mickmouse13 Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Deep plus some.. Awesome wording.
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SoImStillUnsure Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:thanks: Thank you so much!
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etherealpantsmuffin Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2010
beautiful
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SoImStillUnsure Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
:aww: Thanks!
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Hawk76 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
Breathtaking! I love it <3
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SoImStillUnsure Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.
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ariel44 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
That is very full of powerful feeling, I much adore the use of rain in this
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